Wednesday, September 3, 2008

My Dad

WALT ... write descriptions of our Dads
... try to show what our Dad's are like, not tel
... use powerful adjectives and verbs
... proof read our work by confirming our sentences and using our Sounds Alive tool box
... edit by making some changes to words and sentences
... publish our work and send it to Radio Wanaka
We have been writing about our Dads as part of a competition run by Radio Wanaka. The prize is a $1000 gift pack. Hopefully some one will win this prize for their Dad for Father's Day. We will publish some of our work for you next week.
Click on Happy Father's Day to find out about the history, read some quotes, play a word search or send Dad an electronic card.

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