Spider's Lunch
Sneakily, the fat hairy spider silently crawled through the undergrowth. There lying in front of him was a fat juicy fly. The spider was ready to pounce. He did it and the fly was all his. He chewed with venomous teeth. Now he is ready for another fat, juicy fly.
By Jake
Year 4
1 comment:
You did a great job on the descriptive writing piece Jake. You use adjectives well to create a mind picture of the spider and his lunch. Well done.
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